Question

寫作：字數不少于40個詞。(8分)

題目：My Ideal Room ( 我的理想房間)

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My Ideal Room

My ideal (理想的) room is a place like a garden. I don't care about the size of the room. But I must be able to feel relaxed (放松的) when I'm there. The wall is blue. There is a white door in the room. Next to the door, it is a window. The window is white, too..There is a black bed beside the window because I like black. There is a large bookcase next to the bed and there are many books on it. I like this room.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文，談談自己的理想中的房間。題目只給出了主要寫作內容，故動筆前先要認真閱讀題目，確定寫作要點，然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮。結合所寫內容，可知本文主要是用第三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進行敘述。語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。

【亮點說明】短文用了一些短語和句式，增加了文章的色彩，如：I don't care about the size of the room. Next to the door, it is a window. There is a large bookcase next to the bed and there are many books on it.等，用了一些連詞如when,because等，是句子結構復雜了，增加了文章的亮點。

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