Question

寫作：字?jǐn)?shù)不少于40個(gè)詞。(8分)

題目：My Ideal Room ( 我的理想房間)

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My Ideal Room

My ideal (理想的) room is a place like a garden. I don't care about the size of the room. But I must be able to feel relaxed (放松的) when I'm there. The wall is blue. There is a white door in the room. Next to the door, it is a window. The window is white, too..There is a black bed beside the window because I like black. There is a large bookcase next to the bed and there are many books on it. I like this room.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文，談?wù)勛约旱?/span>理想中的房間。題目只給出了主要寫作內(nèi)容，故動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀題目，確定寫作要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。結(jié)合所寫內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是用第三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，增加了文章的色彩，如：I don't care about the size of the room. Next to the door, it is a window. There is a large bookcase next to the bed and there are many books on it.等，用了一些連詞如when,because等，是句子結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜了，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。

考點(diǎn)：考查命題作文