Question

你一定有過很多難忘的假期，它們給你留下了許多美好的回憶。請你描述你印象最深刻的那個(gè)假期。（不少于60字）
1.Where did you...?     2. What did you do?       3. How was the weather there?
4. How were the people and the food there?        5. What did you think of it?
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Answer 1

Last summer ,my family and I went to Beijing for holiday. We visited many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the world Park and so on. In Beijing, I bought some souvenirs for my friends. We had a wonderful time there. The weather in   Beijing was very hot.But I was used to it. The people in Beijing were very friendly. When I needed help, they would help me. The food there was very nice. I liked Beijing very much. I wanted to visited it again.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，要求介紹自己經(jīng)歷過的假期。題目中給出的材料較為詳細(xì)，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)認(rèn)真閱讀所給問題確定寫作內(nèi)容，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文的時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一人稱。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。適當(dāng)使用連接詞。
點(diǎn)評：做英語書面表達(dá)時(shí)，只要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤。