Question

假設(shè)聯(lián)合國(guó)教科文組織正在舉行“保護(hù)地球”英文征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)以“Save the Earth！”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：

現(xiàn)狀	1. 地球變臟、變暖； 2. 自然災(zāi)害多發(fā)；
原因	1. 人口增長(zhǎng)； 2. 砍伐森林、濫殺動(dòng)物；
建議	1. 保護(hù)地球，從我做起； 2. 不吃野生動(dòng)物； 3. 其他建議，請(qǐng)至少列出一個(gè)。

注意:
1. 詞數(shù)70左右。短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要點(diǎn)表達(dá)不分先后，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2. 短文中不要出現(xiàn)具體的學(xué)校名和人名。
Save the Earth！
Our earth was healthy and beautiful in the past. However, __________________________________
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I hope our earth will become more and more beautiful.

Answer 1

One possible version:
Our earth was healthy and beautiful in the past. However, it’s getting dirtier and warmer now. Natural disasters happen more often than before.
Why does this happen? First, there are more and more people on the earth. Second, people cut down forests and kill too many animals.
What can we do then? I think everybody can do something to help save the earth. For example, we shouldn’t eat wild animals. We can also use both sides of the paper and plant more trees.
I hope our earth will become more and more beautiful.
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試題分析：這是一篇給定材料作文，文章內(nèi)容十分明確。并且給出了相關(guān)信息。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，主要文章的結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰，不要漏掉信息點(diǎn)�？梢砸缘谝蝗朔Q(chēng)寫(xiě)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意句子的完整性，做到主謂一致�？梢赃m當(dāng)使用一些連詞，使文章更緊湊，邏輯更清晰。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰明了，句子表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。