Question

根據(jù)中文和英文提示，寫(xiě)一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的回信。信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，其詞數(shù)不計(jì)入所完成的回信內(nèi)。請(qǐng)不要寫(xiě)出你的校名和姓名。
假設(shè)你叫張華，是美國(guó)中學(xué)生鮑勃的朋友。你收到了他的電子郵件，請(qǐng)給他回復(fù)，回答他的問(wèn)題，提出你的建議，并就此事談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?br />

Hi! Zhang Hua, I have a big problem these days. I spend much time watching TV in the evening after doing my homework. So I often stay up and get up late in the morning. As a result, I usually have no time for breakfast and feel tired all day. My parents don’t allow me to watch TV now and force me to go to bed before 10:30. That makes me unhappy. I don’t think they understand me. Do you have the same problem? What should I do? I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours,                           Bob

Hi! Bob,
I’m glad to hear from you.
I hope what I said can help you.
Yours,
Zhang Hua

Answer 1

Hi! Bob,
I’m glad to hear from you.
I used to have the same problem. Cheer up! I’d like to give you some advice.
First, stop watching TV and go to bed earlier. Watching TV too much is bad not only for your eyes but also for your study. Second, you’d better get up on time and have breakfast. Breakfast is the most important meal of the day. Finally, you should understand your parents. All parents love their children. If you listen to them, I’m sure you will become healthier and won’t often feel tired.
I think it’s important for everyone to keep healthy and good living habits help a lot.
I hope what I said can help you.
Yours,
Zhang Hua

試題分析: 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)一封回信。本題材料主要是一封來(lái)信，故動(dòng)筆前一定要認(rèn)真閱讀來(lái)信，爭(zhēng)取在回信中對(duì)來(lái)信中的問(wèn)題都有所回應(yīng)。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，寫(xiě)作中注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫(xiě)作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問(wèn)題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫(xiě)作中語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說(shuō)明有條理，符合邏輯。