Question

假如你是曉飛同學,升入九年級后，你的學習和生活發(fā)生了很大的變化。下面是你上小學時和現(xiàn)在的作息時間對照表，請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，以第一人稱How I’ve changed 為題目，記錄你一天的生活。

Action	Then	Now		Action	Then	Now
get up	7:00	5:30		have sports after school	Yes	No
have breakfast	7:45	6:00		watch TV in the evening	Yes	No
have classes in the morning	three	four		go to bed	20:00	22:00
have classes in the afternoon	two	four
How I’ve changed!
I’m in Grade 9. My life has changed a lot these days…..

Answer 1

I am in Grade 9. I have changed a lot in the last few years. I am much busier than I was in the primary school. I used to get up at 7:00, but now I have to get up at 5:30. I used to have breakfast at 7:4, but now at 6:00. In the past we had three classes in the moring,but now there are four .We usually had two classes in the afternoon then.But we have to have four now .When I was young,I had enough time to have sports after school and watched TV in the evening.As for now, I can’t. I used to go to bed at 20:00,instesd ,I have to go to bed at 22:00 now. As for now， I am very tired, I miss my chlidhood very much .

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。要求以第一人稱的方式敘述在小學和現(xiàn)在的學習生活的不同。主要用到兩種時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時態(tài)。所給內(nèi)容已經(jīng)很是詳細，只要注意句式結(jié)構(gòu)正確，文章調(diào)理連貫就可以了。
【亮點說明】這篇短文在句式上靈活變化，在時間用詞上也不斷變化以避免重復，如in the last few years.，In the past，When I was young,，As for now，then ，now。I have changed a lot ，I used to have breakfast，we had three classes in the moring等。