Question

假如你是一名九年級(jí)學(xué)生李強(qiáng)。你要寫(xiě)一封信給青少年專家Sigmund Friend. 告訴他 你遇到的問(wèn)題。并請(qǐng)求幫助，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列信息 ，完成這封信。

姓名：李強(qiáng)     星座:Gemini     最喜歡的顏色：yellow

存在的問(wèn)題： 父母要求很嚴(yán)格，幾乎沒(méi)空閑時(shí)間發(fā)展自己的愛(ài)好，如打籃球和聽(tīng)音樂(lè)。瘋狂迷戀上網(wǎng)聊天。經(jīng)常很晚回家，不按時(shí)交作業(yè)。有時(shí)考試不及格。父母要求放棄上網(wǎng)聊天，把大部分時(shí)間花在學(xué)習(xí)上。為此你很苦惱。

目前需求：  希望得到建議

Dear Sigmund friend:

   My name is Li Qiang . I am a Grade 9 student.

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                                                                Yours

                                                              Li Qiang

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version：

  Dear Sigmund friend:

   My name is Li Qiang . I am a Grade 9 student. My star sign is Gemini. My favourite colour is yellow. I have some problems. My parents are too strict with me. I hardly have any spare time for my hobbies such as playing basketball and listening to music. I’m crazy about chatting online. I often go (get) home very late. I can’t hand in my homework in time. Sometimes I can’t pass the exam. My parents ask me to give up chatting online. They ask me to spend most time on studies. I feel worried about it. Could you offer me some valuable suggestions(advice)?

                                                                Yours

                                                              Li Qiang

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)應(yīng)該根據(jù)所提供的信息，準(zhǔn)確地自我介紹自己的姓名、星座、最喜歡的顏色以及生活中的問(wèn)題。而且要注意書(shū)信格，正確地表達(dá)自己的求助意愿。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，書(shū)信格式正確。本文中運(yùn)用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如:be strict with, be crazy about, give up, valuable suggestions等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。