Question

書面表達(dá)（15分）

前些年，因為攙扶摔倒老人而惹麻煩的事件偶有發(fā)生，引發(fā)了人們的爭論。遇到跌倒老人要不要扶成了人們討論的熱點。上周你們班利用班會對此進(jìn)行了一次大討論,同學(xué)們提出了不同的觀點,請你根據(jù)討論情況寫一篇短文,并提出自己的觀點.

Some students’ ideas	應(yīng)該相助，但要學(xué)會保護(hù)自己，留下證據(jù)。
Other students’ ideas	少惹麻煩，避而遠(yuǎn)之。
Your idea	……

注意：

1. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的內(nèi)；

2. 詞數(shù)80左右。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Last week we discussed about if we should help the old who fell down.

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Answer 1

Last week we discussed about if we should help the old who fell down. Some students said that they would help them, but they would learn to protect themselves as well, like leaving some eyewitnesses’ telephone numbers or taking some photos to record what happened.

Other students disagreed. They thought they would hold a serious attitude towards helping the old. In order not to cause a lot of trouble, staying away from the old is a good way to protect themselves.

As for me, I will help the old because I think helping others can make me feel happy. If everyone gives a hand to help others, our society will be full of love!

【解析】

試題分析：本文是對社會存在的現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行了班級討論，這里對于這種發(fā)表不同觀點的短文，應(yīng)該用三段式，第一段正方觀點，第二段反方觀點，最后陳述自己的觀點，敘述時要注意動詞時態(tài)及主謂一致的問題。

【亮點說明】短文用了一些短語和句式，如：Last week we discussed about if we should help the old who fell down. They thought they would hold a serious attitude towards helping the old. In order not to cause a lot of trouble, staying away from the old is a good way to protect themselves.還用了一些連詞if，that等連詞，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)更加復(fù)雜，增加文章的亮點。

考點：提綱作文。