Question

1．假如你班將舉行以"中學(xué)生自我保護(hù)"為主題的英語班會(huì)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示寫一封100次左右的安全倡議書，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
內(nèi)容提示：
1．不帶管制刀具到學(xué)校；
2．不私自下河游泳；
3．不打架；
4．上學(xué)的路上注意安全，遇到緊急情況要報(bào)警；
參考詞匯：
管制刀具  restricted knives   緊急情況  emergency
Asweknow，safetyisthemostimportantthinginourlives．So，weshouldtryourbesttomakesurewearesafe．We mustn't bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems．Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds by ourselves without our parents permission．And，we should be friendly to others so fighting is strongly banned．Make sure that we should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home．Furthermore，if we meet some emergency，we must call for help from the police or our teachers．
In a word，following these safety rules above can make us live in peace．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是就中學(xué)生自我保護(hù)問題，向全校學(xué)生發(fā)出倡議．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
（1）不帶管制刀具到學(xué)校；
（2）不私自下河洗澡；
（3）不打架；
（4）上學(xué)的路上注意安全，遇到緊急情況要報(bào)警；

常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
restricted knives or things管制刀具：
have a bath洗澡
try one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事
be friendly to sb 對(duì)某人友好
pay attention to 留意，關(guān)注
on one's way to  sp．在某人去某地的路上
furthermore此外
in a word總之
make sb do sth讓某人做某事
 in peace和平地
高分句型：
1．①Furthermore，②if we meet some emergency，we must call for help from the police or our teachers．
①furthermore此外，引出下文．
②if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主句含有情態(tài)動(dòng)詞must，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)代替一般將來時(shí)．
2．①In a word，②following these safety rules above can ③make us live in peace．
①in a word總之，總述以上內(nèi)容．
②following these safety rules above 動(dòng)名詞短語做主語
③make sb do sth讓某人做某事，make的用法

解答 How to Protect Ourselves
As we know，safety is the most important thing in our lives．So，we should try our best to make sure we are safe．We mustn't bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems．（不帶管制刀具到學(xué)校）Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds by ourselves without our parents permission．（不私自下河洗澡）And，we should be friendly to others so fighting is strongly banned．（不打架） Make sure that we should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home．Furthermore，if we meet some emergency，we must call for help from the police or our teachers．（上學(xué)的路上注意安全，遇到緊急情況要報(bào)警）（高分句型）
In a word，following these safety rules above can make us live in peace．（高分句型）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 初中英語的作文，著重考察學(xué)生連詞成句的能力，要在"準(zhǔn)"字上下功夫．在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動(dòng)詞的數(shù)關(guān)系和動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)等諸多方面．在對(duì)所出現(xiàn)的問題或是采取的措施描寫中注意使用連詞或是好的句式．對(duì)于中學(xué)作文的寫作，盡量將所學(xué)的知識(shí)運(yùn)用到作文中，寫出富于變化、結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊的文章，不要出現(xiàn)中式英文．在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中，注意多背誦范文，對(duì)于寫的好的句子進(jìn)行默寫，考試時(shí)就能寫出準(zhǔn)確地道的作文．