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14．為配合創(chuàng)建"綠色健康學(xué)校"工作，學(xué)生會(huì)發(fā)起以"Make Our School Greener"為主題的英語(yǔ)征文比賽．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息寫(xiě)一篇短文，短文題目和開(kāi)頭已給出．
要點(diǎn)提示：1、愛(ài)護(hù)校園內(nèi)的花草樹(shù)木=2、保持校園整潔，不亂扔廢棄物
3、節(jié)約用水用電、對(duì)他人有禮貌，和睦相處．
4、堅(jiān)持鍛煉…
注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
2．結(jié)合以上要點(diǎn)，可圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫．
3．文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
Make Our School Greener
In order to make our school greener，I think we should                                             ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①We should also be polite  to others，and try our best to get on well with each other．我們也應(yīng)該對(duì)別人有禮貌，并盡我們所能與對(duì)方友好相處．句子中be polite  to sb對(duì)某人有禮貌；try one's best to do sth盡力做某事，get on well with 與某某相處融洽．
②If you understand it，you"ll  necessarily benefit a lot from it．如果你理解它，你必然就會(huì)從中受益很多．句子考查if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，主句用一般將來(lái)時(shí)，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．

解答 In order to make our campus green and harmonious to live and study in，it is suggested that we students should do many things，which can be listed as follows．（引出話題）
     First of all，never destroy the flowers and trees in our school．Besides，we should keep the school environment neat and clean，thus throwing away the waste should be forbidden．Meanwhile，try to save water if necessary and never forget to turn off the lights in the daytime or when the classroom is empty．
     What"s more，regular exercise can help us stay healthy and build up our body．We should also be polite to others，and try our best to get on well with each other．（高分句型）（具體步驟）
     In short，whatever you do，please remember to lead a green and healthy life．If you understand it，you"ll necessarily benefit a lot from it（高分句型）．（發(fā)出倡議）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是寫(xiě)一篇給定材料的書(shū)面表達(dá)，寫(xiě)作的話題為使我們的校園更加綠化，內(nèi)容包括是校園綠化的重要性，綠化的方式有愛(ài)護(hù)校園內(nèi)的花草樹(shù)木，保持校園整潔，不亂扔廢棄物，節(jié)約用水，離開(kāi)教室前記得關(guān)燈，堅(jiān)持鍛煉，增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)，禮貌待人等，同時(shí)在寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意符合題意和語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確性和連貫性．