Question

最近你校校園網(wǎng)上出現(xiàn)了一個英語帖子，意在了解同學(xué)們在體育愛好、藝術(shù)特長等方面的情況，請你用“李華”這一網(wǎng)名，根據(jù)以下三個提示回貼。
提示：(1) What’s your favorite …?
(2) What do you often do in your spare time?
(3) What’s your advice to your teacher or school so that you can improve your skill?
要求：(1) 回帖中須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
(2) 回帖中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名。
(3) 詞數(shù)：60～80個。
Li Hua, 11:00 Apr.16
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Answer 1

One possible version:
I like sports and my favorite sport is basketball. Every day I practice basketball with my classmates after school. I also enjoy listening to music but I can’t sing well. I’m afraid to sing in front of people. I hope our school will start a singing club. I’m sure I can make great progress with the help of our teachers. I also hope there will be less homework on weekends. Then I can have more time to do what I’m interested in.

試題分析：1.本文應(yīng)該以第一人稱書寫，但不能出現(xiàn)真實校名和人名。2.要正確表達每一個要點，不可遺漏，當(dāng)然也可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不能脫離主題。3.本文主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。4.詞數(shù)為60-80個。
【亮點說明】文中使用了also、and、but、Then等詞，使得前后句子聯(lián)系緊密，過渡自然。主從復(fù)合句I’m sure I can make great progress with the help of our teachers.和Then I can have more time to do what I’m interested in.也使用的很好。