Question

上周末，你媽媽生病了，所以你幫媽媽干家務(wù)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)方框的內(nèi)容，詳細(xì)記敘上周末的事情。詞數(shù)70個(gè)左右，開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫。

媽媽的病癥	1. 頭痛 2. 喉嚨疼 3. 咳嗽
醫(yī)生的建議	1. 一天吃三次藥 2.  … （補(bǔ)充一條）
我的行動(dòng)	幫媽媽干下列家務(wù)： 1. 掃地 2. 折疊衣服3.  4. 洗碗 5.  …（至少補(bǔ)充一條）
感想	……

Answer 1

Last weekend, my mother fell ill. She had a headache, had a sore throat and coughed a lot. She went to a doctor. The doctor told my mother to take medicine three times a day. He also advised my mother to drink hot water with honey and have a good rest. Because my mother was sick, I helped mom  with housework and chores. I swept the floor, folded my own clothes, did the dishes and took out the rubbish. I satisfaction when I saw the joy on my mother’s face.

試題分析：這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文介紹上周發(fā)生的事，故用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)用第一人稱(chēng)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇段文要點(diǎn)全面，能夠適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。時(shí)態(tài)人稱(chēng)運(yùn)用得當(dāng)，文中用到的短語(yǔ)詞組told my mother to，had a strong feeling of，advised my mother to，hot water with honey使文章更豐富。