Question

假如你叫李華，是陽光鎮(zhèn)的一名中學(xué)生。你想在學(xué)校創(chuàng)建一個(gè)英語角，為此，你在班級(jí)學(xué)生中展開調(diào)查，調(diào)查結(jié)果如下。請根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文，描述同學(xué)們的看法和理由，并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。

觀點(diǎn)	理由
65%的同學(xué)贊成	提高英語口語水平 獲得知識(shí)，開闊視野 學(xué)會(huì)與人交流
35%的同學(xué)反對	1. 作業(yè)多，沒時(shí)間 2. 英語不好，不敢開口
你的觀點(diǎn)	….

要求：1）短文應(yīng)包括所給所有信息， 并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2）語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，條理清楚，字跡工整。
3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右。開頭已給，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
We plan to set up an English Corner in our school. To know about what the students think about it, we’ve made a survey about it in our class. Here are the results.

Answer 1

We plan to set up English Corner in out school. To know about what the students think about it , we’ve made a survey about it in our class . Here are the results.
65% of the students think it’s a good idea to set an English Corner. Firstly ,they can improve their spoken English by joining it . Secondly, students can not only get knowledge but also open their minds. Thirdly , students will learn how to communicate with others.
However, 35%of the students don’t think so. Some of them are so busy with their homework that they have no time for it . Others are not good at English, as a result , they are afraid of speaking English in front of others.
In my opinion, I think we should set up an English Corner to practice speaking Englsih. If so , we will be more and more confident of using English.

試題分析：考查提綱類書面表達(dá)：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來. 動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中運(yùn)用一些常見的短語set up建立； communicate with與某人交流； as a result 結(jié)果；are afraid of 害怕；in front of在。。前面； In my opinion在我看來； practice dong sth練習(xí)做某事。Secondly, students can not only get knowledge but also open their minds.在這個(gè)句子中not only ..but also 連接兩個(gè)并列的謂語動(dòng)詞，時(shí)態(tài)保持一致。Thirdly , students will learn how to communicate with others.這句子中特殊疑問詞+不定式做動(dòng)詞的賓語。However, 35%of the students don’t think so. Some of them are so busy with their homework that they have no time for it .這個(gè)句子中用到so…that ..如此以致于。