Question

8．Write at least 60words about the topic"A success experience in my memory"（以"我記憶中的一次成功經(jīng)歷"為題，寫(xiě)一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不計(jì)入在內(nèi)）．
Use the following points as reference．（以下問(wèn)題僅供參考）
•When did you have your success experience？
•How did it happen？（Please write in detail）
•What have you learnt from the experience？
（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分．）
In my memory，there are full of success experiences．The most unforgettable one happenedLast term．I was not good at subjects at school and I couldn't get good marks in exams．I felt worried about my study so I decided to work much harder．I listened to the teachers more carefully in class and did more exercises after class．What's more，I often asked my teachers for help．Although I met a lot of difficulties，I didn't give up．Now I have done better in my study．I believe that nothing is too difficult if I put my heart into it．IfI meet with difficulties in my life，I should try my best to overcome them．In a word，only the person who overcomes difficulties will be successful．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①I felt worried about my study so I decided to work much harder．我對(duì)我的學(xué)習(xí)感到擔(dān)心，所以我決定更加努力學(xué)習(xí)．句子中feel worried about 表示對(duì)某某感到擔(dān)心，decide to do sth決定做某事，后面跟to引導(dǎo)的不定式短語(yǔ)； much harder更努力，much修飾后面的比較級(jí)形式．
②What's more，I often asked my teachers for help．更重要的是，我經(jīng)常向我的老師的尋求幫助．句子中What's more是一個(gè)固定短語(yǔ)，表示更重要的是，ask for請(qǐng)求…； 要求…．

解答 In my memory，there are full of success experiences（引出話題）．The most unforgettable one happened Last term（經(jīng)歷發(fā)生的時(shí)間）．I was not good at subjects at school and I couldn't get good marks in exams．I felt worried about my study so I decided to work much harder（高分句型）．I listened to the teachers more carefully in class and did more exercises after class．What's more，I often asked my teachers for help（高分句型）．Although I met a lot of difficulties，I didn't give up．（具體介紹這次經(jīng)歷的過(guò)程）Now I have done better in my study．I believe that nothing is too difficult if I put my heart into it．If I meet with difficulties in my life，I should try my best to overcome them．In a word，only the person who overcomes difficulties will be successful．（從這次經(jīng)歷得到的啟示）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是一篇以提綱提供情景的作文，內(nèi)容是我記憶中的一次成功經(jīng)歷，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意要點(diǎn)齊全，不能漏寫(xiě)，并且要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語(yǔ)法規(guī)則的正確性，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢．