Question

4．假定你的好友名叫Bill，十一名美國中學生，他打算今年暑假來寧夏旅游．請你根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容和所給提示用英語寫一篇介紹他的短文．短文首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
提示：
1 家庭情況、性格及愛好；
2 老師及同學對他的評價；
3 來寧夏旅游的原因．
要求：
1 詞數(shù)80左右；
2 合理增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Bill is my good friend．He is an American middle school student．He will come to travel in Ningxia this summer vacation．He is the only child in his family．His father is a doctor，and his mother is a teacher．He is friendly and is ready to help others．His teachers and classmates think he is clever and hard-working．He often spends his spare time traveling around the world．He says that Ningxia has many famous places of interest．That's the reason why he will come to Ningxia this summer．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇命題作文，主要是讓同學們寫一篇短文來介紹一下美國好友Bill，他今年暑假將要來寧夏旅游，內(nèi)容要點包括：1、家庭情況、性格及愛好；2、老師及同學對他的評價；3、為什么來寧夏旅游．由于介紹的是Bill，所以人稱要使用第三人稱，由于介紹的是他現(xiàn)在的狀況和將要來旅行，所以時態(tài)要使用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，要根據(jù)不同的內(nèi)容去選擇合適的時態(tài)．
重要的短語和句型：
come to來到
the only唯一的
be ready to help others準備幫助他人
clever and hard-working聰明又努力
spend…（in） doing sth．花費時間或金錢做某事
travel around the world周游世界
places of interest名勝古跡
the reason why…的原因
高分句型：
His teachers and classmates think he is clever and hard-working．他的老師和同學認為他很聰明，學習也很努力．
and連接兩個不同的名詞作主語，謂語動詞要用復數(shù)，本句含有一個省略that的賓語從句
That's the reason why he will come to Ningxia this summer．那就是他什么來寧夏列旅游的原因．
why也可以引導定語從句，這時先行詞往往是reason

解答 參考答案：
    Bill is my good friend．He is an American middle school student（介紹Bill的身份）．He will come to travel in Ningxia this summer vacation．He is the only child in his family．His father is a doctor，and his mother is a teacher（介紹家人）．He is friendly and is ready to help others．【高分句型一】His teachers and classmates think he is clever and hard-working（老師及同學對他的評價）．He often spends his spare time traveling around the world．He says that Ningxia has many famous places of interest（說明來寧夏旅游的原因）．【高分句型二】That's the reason why he will come to Ningxia this summer．

點評 寫命題作文時，首先要仔細審題，確定要使用的人稱和時態(tài)，還要注意羅列內(nèi)容要點，內(nèi)容要點不能有漏落，行文要流暢，可以適當?shù)脑鎏砑毠?jié)，在表達的時候，要使用地道的英語，可以使用把握比較高的結(jié)構(gòu)，短語等等，比如賓語從句、定語從句等等，這樣可以提高文章的檔次，獲得更多的得分點．