Question

書面表達(dá)

請(qǐng)以“My Vacation”為題寫一篇短文。假如你是 Mike，你印象最深的是去年暑假和家人一起去鄉(xiāng)下（countryside）的爺爺家。鄉(xiāng)下的空氣很好，天氣也不錯(cuò)；你和爺爺去爬山、釣魚（go fishing），和堂弟去游泳；奶奶每天都給你做好吃的。你們過得很愉快。

要求50詞左右，文章的開頭已給出。

My Vacation

I remembered my last summer vacation.                                        

                                                                            

                                                                            

                                                                            

                                                                            

                                                                            

                                                                            

                                                                            

                                                                            

                                                                            

                                                                            

                                                                            

                                                                            

                                                                            

 

Answer 1

【答案】

I remembered my last summer vacation. My family and I went to see my grandparents in the countryside. The air there is fresh, and the weather there was good, too.I went to the mountains and went fshing with my grandfather. And I went swimming with my cousin. My grandmother cooked delicious food for us every day. We had a great time.

【解析】

試題分析：本書面表達(dá)是有關(guān)一次郊游的，書寫時(shí)首先我們應(yīng)該確定用第一人稱；由于是上周，所以應(yīng)該用過去時(shí)。寫作時(shí)，注意句型和短語(yǔ)的應(yīng)用，應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)。另外，還應(yīng)該注意提示信息。

考點(diǎn)：命題作文。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：書寫本文時(shí)應(yīng)該，注意交代清楚郊游的時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，人物，以及感受。特別是寫感受，應(yīng)該深刻。