Question

隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)展，人們消費(fèi)觀念的轉(zhuǎn)變，購物方式也悄然發(fā)生了變化�，F(xiàn)在網(wǎng)購已成為一種時(shí)尚，越來越多的學(xué)生也正加人到網(wǎng)購的群體當(dāng)中來。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格提示，

寫一篇英語短文。

優(yōu)點(diǎn)	1. 足不出戶，節(jié)約時(shí)間，避免勞累； 2. 價(jià)格通常較為便宜； 3. 可供選擇的范圍廣，種類多。
缺點(diǎn)	1. 只能看到圖片，看不到東西本身； 2. 容易購買大量不是太需要的東   西，造成浪費(fèi)。

要求：1.內(nèi)容表述完整；

2. 80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

提示詞：網(wǎng)購(shopping online)

題型分析：此次寫作是以第一人稱，使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來闡述網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)。

行文思路：本次寫作可以分三部分來行文，第一部分介紹網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點(diǎn)：時(shí)尚(become a fashion).足不出戶就可以買到自己想要的（buy…without going outdoors)、價(jià)格便宜品種多。第二部分說明網(wǎng)購的缺點(diǎn)：圖片與

商品不符(things different from the pictures)、易造成浪費(fèi)(a waste of money)。第三部分表達(dá)自己對(duì)網(wǎng)購所持的觀點(diǎn)。窗分點(diǎn)行文過程中由表達(dá)優(yōu)點(diǎn)轉(zhuǎn)入缺點(diǎn)時(shí)，使用Every coin has two sides. 最后以In a word來引出自己對(duì)網(wǎng)購所持觀點(diǎn)會(huì)使文章過渡自然、語意流暢。同時(shí)，文中可以使用一些賓語從句、定語從句等較高級(jí)句式以增加本文的得分亮點(diǎn)。

佳作展示：

With the development of the Internet,
many people are used to shopping online.      

Answer 1

 With the development of the Internet ， many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our everyday life. More students also join the gmup. Just by a click of the mouse,we can buy what we're interested in without going outdoors. We can avoid getting tired and save time. When shopping online,we can choose from more kinds of things whose prices are usually lower.

Every coin has two sides. It's very easy for us to buy things different from the pictures we see on the Internet. At the same time,shopping online may cause people to buy things that are not really needed. That's a waste of money ！

  In a word,I love shopping online very much.