Question

7．2014年世界青奧會(huì)將在中國(guó)南京舉行，現(xiàn)在南京青奧會(huì)組委會(huì)正在招募志愿者（Volunteer）．假如你是Li Ming，作為一名中學(xué)生，你想推薦自己當(dāng)一名青奧會(huì)志愿者．請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封推薦信給青奧會(huì)組委會(huì)．內(nèi)容如下：

個(gè)人介紹	熱心有禮，助人為樂(lè)，善于交友，擅長(zhǎng)英語(yǔ)．（就其中一項(xiàng)舉一例說(shuō)明）
申報(bào)條件	目前是校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部的主席；去年作為交換留學(xué)生（exchange student）在英國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)；…（至少一點(diǎn)）
申報(bào)目的	努力幫助來(lái)自世界各地的朋友了解南京；…（至少一點(diǎn)）

要求：
1．詞數(shù)100個(gè)左右．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
2．所寫(xiě)短文必須包括以上要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮并加入過(guò)渡詞句使短文通順流暢．
3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息．

評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：
語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整．
Dear Sir：
I want to be a volunteer of the Youth Olympic Games．I am happy that the Youth Olympic Games will be held in Nanjing．I want to be a volunteer very much．
I am a warm-hearted and polite boy/girl．I like to help others．On the bus，I usually give my seat to the people in need．I like making friends．I am good at English and I can speak English very well．
Now，I am the chairperson of the English Club in our school．Last year，I studied as an exchange student in England．I have been a host of English Evening for many times in our school．My teachers and schoolmates think I am a good host．
If I am chosen a volunteer，I will try to help the friends from all over the world learn more about Nanjing．And I will try to make our city Nanjing be more famous in the world．
I hope I can be a good volunteer if I am chosen．I am looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours Sincerely：
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是推薦自己當(dāng)一名青奧會(huì)志愿者．請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封推薦信給青奧會(huì)組委會(huì)，注意信件的格式．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．個(gè)人介紹 熱心有禮，助人為樂(lè)，善于交友，擅長(zhǎng)英語(yǔ)．（就其中一項(xiàng)舉一例說(shuō)明）
2．申報(bào)條件 目前是校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部的主席；去年作為交換留學(xué)生（exchange student）在英國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)；…（至少一點(diǎn)）
3．申報(bào)目的 努力幫助來(lái)自世界各地的朋友了解南京；…（至少一點(diǎn)）
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
make friends 交朋友
be good at 擅長(zhǎng)
try to do sth 盡力做某事
make+sth+adj 讓某某怎樣
【高分句型】
1．①I(mǎi)f I②am chosen a volunteer，I will③try to help the friends from all over the world learn more about Nanjing．
①if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，遵循主將從現(xiàn)的規(guī)則．
②一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)am/is/are+過(guò)去分詞
③try to do sth 盡力做某事
2．I hope ①I(mǎi) can be a good volunteer②if I am chosen．
①hope后是省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語(yǔ)從句．
②if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，主句含有情態(tài)動(dòng)詞can，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．
3．I am ①looking forward to②hearing from you．
①look forward to doing sth 期待做某事
②hear from sb 收到某人的信

解答 Dear Sir，
I want to be a volunteer of the Youth Olympic Games．I am happy that the Youth Olympic Games will be held in Nanjing．I want to be a volunteer very much．
I am a warm-hearted and polite boy/girl．I like to help others．On the bus，I usually give my seat to the people in need．I like making friends．I am good at English and I can speak English very well．（個(gè)人介紹 ）
Now，I am the chairperson of the English Club in our school．Last year，I studied as an exchange student in England．I have been a host of English Evening for many times in our school．My teachers and schoolmates think I am a good host．（申報(bào)條件）
If I am chosen a volunteer，I will try to help the friends from all over the world learn more about Nanjing．【高分句型】And I will try to make our city Nanjing be more famous in the world．（申報(bào)目的 ）
I hope I can be a good volunteer if I am chosen．【高分句型】I am looking forward to hearing from you．【高分句型】
Yours Sincerely：
Li Ming

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是寫(xiě)一篇給定材料的推薦信，寫(xiě)作的話題為推薦自己當(dāng)青奧會(huì)志愿者，寫(xiě)作的內(nèi)容包括個(gè)人姓名，性格特征和特長(zhǎng)等方面的介紹，覺(jué)得能成為一名志愿者的條件，以及為何申報(bào)志愿者，同時(shí)寫(xiě)上個(gè)人的期望，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)主語(yǔ)推薦信的格式，同時(shí)應(yīng)注意符合題意，注意語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確性和連貫性