Question

寫一篇短文，把你的好朋友Linda向大家做一個介紹，Linda的情況如下：
1．女孩，13歲，來自英國。
2．是第一中學的一個學生（No.1 Junior High School）;
3.矮個，長發(fā)，圓臉，大鼻子，大眼睛；
4．她的電話號碼：010（8257799）
提示詞：be from,round,telephone number.
要求：1.把所有信息表達完整。2.適當增加一些內(nèi)容。3.詞數(shù)：60個詞左右。
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Answer 1

Hello,everyone!
This is my good friend Linda.She is a girl.She is thirteen years old and she is from England.Linda is in No.1 Junior High School.Her favorite subject is math.She is short and she has long hair and a round face.She has a big nose and two big eyes. She is beautiful and she often helps us. We all like her.Her telephone number is 010(8257799).

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，主語是第三人稱，注意時態(tài)語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如：She is thirteen years old ,she is from England,Linda is in No.1 Junior High School.Her favorite subject is math.She is short and she has long hair.Her telephone number is 010(8257799).等，學習中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。