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根據(jù)下面的圖畫，請你用英語寫一篇短文，大約包括6～9個句子，短文要求達意，正確、連貫．短文開頭已給出．

It's seven o'clock in the evening.

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學生：習作： 　　It's seven o'clock in the evening. Tom's family is(X1) all at home. Tom is listening to the music. His sister is playing(X2) a cat. His father is reading a book, His mother is making a telephone call with(X3) somebody. His grandparents are watching TV. There is a picture and a clock on the wall, and there is a light and some books on the desk. They are all enjoying themself(X4). 　　剖析：family指整個家庭時是集體名詞，相應的動詞用單數(shù)，指家庭的一個個成員時，相應的動詞用復數(shù)．例如： 　　My family is a large one．我家是個大家庭． 　　My family are all sitting around the table eating．我家人都坐在桌旁吃飯． 　　很顯然文中指的是Tom家的成員，因此謂語動詞應改用復數(shù)are． 　　2．play是玩耍、游樂；而“拿……玩，以……自娛”，要用play with，此處是逗貓玩，所以應改用playing with． 　　3．給某人打電話應用make a telephone call to somebody． 　　4．enjoy oneself=have a good time．表示“玩得很高興”．them是復數(shù)，所以self也應改用其復數(shù)形式selves，即：themselves． 　　總評：本文要點齊全，達到了預期的寫作目的，文章語言流暢、時態(tài)正確、方位有序、意思表達清楚，文中的錯誤主要集中在謂語動詞的單復數(shù)和一些動詞短語的搭配上，希望作者引起重視．