Question

十月四日是世界動(dòng)物日，你校組織以“I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals”為題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。張華將參加比賽，請(qǐng)你以張華的名義寫一篇100字左右的英語(yǔ)演講稿推薦自己，內(nèi)容如下：

品質(zhì)	善良，善待動(dòng)物；勤勞，做額外的事
愛好	看關(guān)于動(dòng)物的書籍；有空時(shí)去觀鳥
事跡	收養(yǎng)無(wú)家可歸的小動(dòng)物；為Save China’s Tigers 籌款
感悟	動(dòng)物是人類的朋友；保護(hù)動(dòng)物就是保護(hù)我們自己
打算	……(至少兩點(diǎn))

提示：額外的extra ,收養(yǎng)adopt, 無(wú)家可歸homeless

Save China’s Tigers 拯救中國(guó)虎（一個(gè)慈善機(jī)構(gòu)）

I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals

Hello, everyone. I’m Zhang Hua. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals. I’m glad to make a speech here.

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If I can be a volunteer,________________________________________________________

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Thank you for listening !

 

Answer 1

I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals

Hello, everyone. I’m Zhang Hua. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals. I’m glad to make a speech here.

I am kind to not only others but also animals. I am also hard—working and don’t mind doing extra work. I like reading books about animals. I often go birdwatching in my free time. I also do something useful for animals. When I see homeless animals，I will adopt and take good care of them. Once I raised money for Save China’s tigers. I know animals are our friends. Protecting them is just protecting ourselves.

If I can be a volunteer, I will work harder and do more meaningful things to protect animals.I will tell more people to love animals .

Thank you for listening !

【解析】

試題分析：本文是個(gè)演講稿，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文中出現(xiàn)一些常見的短語(yǔ)：take good care of照顧某人 work harder 努力工作mind doing介意做某事 raised money for為。。籌集錢。I am kind to not only others but also animals.這個(gè)句話中用not only ,but also 來(lái)連接兩個(gè)并列的名詞。Protecting them is just protecting ourselves.這個(gè)句子中提到動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)。If I can be a volunteer, I will work harder and do more meaningful things to protect animals這個(gè)句子中有if來(lái)引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句，and連接work,do并列謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，to protect animals表示目的狀語(yǔ)。

考點(diǎn)： 提綱類作文。