Question

假如你是陽(yáng)光中學(xué)的一名初三學(xué)生Simon,你要寫封信給青少年專家Sigmund Friend,告訴他你的煩惱，并請(qǐng)求幫助。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格中所列的信息，完成一封信。

個(gè)人信息	1998年9月10日出生；校足球隊(duì)成員，喜歡踢足球；最喜歡紅色，因?yàn)椤��?/p>
性格特點(diǎn)	勤奮，謙虛；有時(shí)多慮；注意細(xì)節(jié)；自信(舉一例)……
煩惱	作業(yè)多，經(jīng)常熬夜，睡眠不足，上課疲勞；父母不許我在外面踢球到很晚；他們只關(guān)心考試分?jǐn)?shù)，沒(méi)注意到我的進(jìn)步，我已經(jīng)盡力……
愿望	希望得到有價(jià)值的建議。

要求：1. 表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫。

          2. 要點(diǎn)必須包括表格中的所有信息，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

          3. 詞數(shù)100左右(信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。

Dear Sigmund Friend,

     My name is Simon. I’m a Grade 9 student in Sunshine Middle School. __________                  __

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What should I do? Can you help me? I’m looking forward to hearing from you!

Best wishes!

Simon.                                              

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

 Dear Sigmund Friend,

     My name is Simon. I’m a Grade 9 student in Sunshine Middle School. I was born on September 10^th, 1998. My favourite sport is football and I’m a member of the school football team. I like red best because red is the colour of heat and represents power and strong feelings. Wearing red can make it easier for me to take action.

     I’m hard-working and modest. I worry too much at times. I always pay attention to details. I’m confident and I’m never afraid of making a speech to a large group of people.

Now I have too much homework every day. I often stay up late to complete the exercises. I don’t get enough sleep and I feel tired in class, My parents don’t allow me to stay out late to play football. They care only about marks after exams. They don’t see my progress, but I have tried my best to do it well.

Can you please offer me some valuable suggestions?

What should I do? Can you help me? I’m looking forward to hearing from you!

Best wishes!

Simon.      

【解析】

試題分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料簡(jiǎn)單�？忌�在寫作之前必須認(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)，要求寫自己的性格和煩惱、愿望。應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。人稱用第一人稱。注意仔細(xì)閱讀表格，分析英語(yǔ)的正確表達(dá)和句子之間的銜接。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】 本文做到了包含所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)句通順，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)運(yùn)用正確。還運(yùn)用了favourite，pay attention to , be afraid of, too much homework, feel tired , allow … to …, because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句、動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)，等等。并注意了句子開(kāi)頭的變化和的銜接如：Now, but等等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。