Question

根據(jù)下面的提示寫(xiě)一篇70字左右的作文

1. 昨晚，Simon做了一個(gè)夢(mèng)

2. 在夢(mèng)中他追趕一只兔子來(lái)到一扇門(mén)前。

3. 兔子輕松穿過(guò)這道門(mén)，Simon個(gè)子太大無(wú)法進(jìn)入

4. 他喝下門(mén)旁邊的一瓶水，瓶子上面有一個(gè)標(biāo)簽“請(qǐng)喝我”。

5. 喝水之后，他變得越來(lái)越小。

6. 他穿過(guò)這道門(mén)進(jìn)入一個(gè)美麗的花園，在那兒玩的很開(kāi)心

                                                                                  

                                                                                  

                                                                                  

                                                                                  

                                                                                  

                                                                                  

                                                                                  

                                                                         

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Last night Simon had a dream. In his dream, he ran after the rabbit and came to a door. The rabbit walked through the door easily but Simon was too tall to go though it.

Then he saw a bottle of water near the door. He drank the bottle of water with notes “Drink me”. After he drank it, he became smaller and smaller . then he walked through the door and went into a beautiful garden.

There he had a good time.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，所給材料比較詳細(xì)，結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知是寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于一個(gè)夢(mèng)的記述文。由于是記述過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情，故主要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，人稱主要是單數(shù)第一人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題。記述文一般按照時(shí)間或者是清風(fēng)發(fā)展的順序進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，序數(shù)詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，、條理清楚，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：做英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)時(shí)，要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語(yǔ)法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤。日常學(xué)習(xí)中，注意多背誦范文，熟記一些經(jīng)典句型，考試時(shí)就能有所參照，有的放矢。