Question

假如你是Zhang Xue,你在申請(qǐng)參加一個(gè)目的地為美國(guó)的夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng),請(qǐng)你用英語寫一份申請(qǐng)。申請(qǐng)的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出。要點(diǎn)如下：
1. 參加的目的是為了提高英語和了解美國(guó)文化；
2. 愛好運(yùn)動(dòng)和流行音樂；
3. 希望住在有三到四個(gè)孩子的美國(guó)家庭。
4. 適當(dāng)自由發(fā)揮自己的興趣愛好。
注意:字?jǐn)?shù)60-80詞,開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總數(shù)字；文章不要提及真實(shí)的校名和人名。
參考詞匯：①summer camp n. (夏令營(yíng))；
②American culture n. (美國(guó)文化) ；
③pop music n.流行音樂
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Answer 1

Dear Sir or Madam:
I want to join in the summer camp. It’s a good way to improve my English and help me to know more about American culture .
I often surf the Internet for something new. I love sports and pop music. I do well in English and talk with foreigners freely. I’m very proud of it.
I hope to stay in a large American family with three or four children . I’m sure we will have a great time together.
I’m looking forward to your reply. Thank you.

試題分析：本文是一篇提綱作文。所給要點(diǎn)比較詳細(xì)。在寫作時(shí)要做到語句準(zhǔn)確，不遺漏任何一個(gè)要點(diǎn)，也可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不能脫離主題。本文應(yīng)以第一人稱書寫，主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】該文語言規(guī)范，準(zhǔn)外地表達(dá)了每一個(gè)要點(diǎn)。文中使用了一些短語如do well in、be proud of、have a great time等，為文章增色不少。