Question

為了使同學(xué)們更加健康快樂(lè)地成長(zhǎng)，學(xué)校決定向同學(xué)們征求建議。假如你是王波，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)向校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一篇建議信。

內(nèi)容包括：	Suggestions for a Better School Life
	學(xué)校	老師
	﹡常開(kāi)放圖書(shū)館 ﹡組織更多課后活動(dòng) ﹡給予我們更多的運(yùn)動(dòng)時(shí)間 ﹡少組織考試 ﹡﹍﹍	﹡讓課堂更有趣 ﹡課堂上說(shuō)得更簡(jiǎn)單明了一些 ﹡準(zhǔn)時(shí)下課 ﹡布置少一點(diǎn)作業(yè) ﹡﹍﹍

作文要求：
文中應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。語(yǔ)句連貫，80詞左右。
不能在作文中出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和姓名。作文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear headmaster,
I’m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will                  
                                                                              
Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter!
Yours sincerely,
Wang Bo

Answer 1

Dear headmaster,
I’m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will open the library more often. Second, I think our school can organize more after-class activities. Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports, art and music. And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well.
As for our teachers, I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting. And if they can talk less but more clearly in class, we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice. What’s more, I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time.
Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter!
Yours sincerely,
Wang Bo

解析這是一封建議信，開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出了，就把要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)全就可以了，要點(diǎn)是以表格的形式給出的，所以審題時(shí)，表格是重點(diǎn)，表格分兩部分，一是給校長(zhǎng)的建議，還有是給老師的建議，要用學(xué)過(guò)的句型表達(dá)清楚，除了列出的建議，還要求學(xué)生自由發(fā)揮寫(xiě)出建議，要求比按要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)更難點(diǎn)，要求用自己的語(yǔ)言組織。還要注意使用一些關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文章更連貫。象這篇范文里的，first，second，next，what’s more。