Question

海口是一個美麗的城市，近幾年來�？诎l(fā)生了巨大的變化。請你根據(jù)以下表格所提供的信息，寫一篇70詞左右的小短文，談?wù)労？趲资�年前的狀況和現(xiàn)在所發(fā)生的變化。
要求：1、涵蓋所有提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2、不少于70詞（不包括已給出的短文開頭）；
3、語句通順，語法正確。

海 口	過 去	現(xiàn) 在
人口	25萬	150萬
道路	窄	寬
居住環(huán)境	小、暗	高、亮，舒服
教育	很少人有機會享受優(yōu)質(zhì)教育	學(xué)生可以在現(xiàn)代化、舒適的教室學(xué)習(xí)
生活狀況	艱難	越來越好

 
Haikou has developed rapidly these years.                                       

Answer 1

Haikou has developed rapidly these years. But In the 1960s, there were only 25,000 people in the city. The roads were narrow. And many people were crowded in a small and dark house. Few children had the chance to receive a good education. Life was very hard at that time.
But now Haikou has changed a lot. The population in Haikou is 1,500,000 now. The roads are wide and people can live in tall and bright buildings. And students can study in modern and comfortable classrooms. Life is better and better in Haikou now.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，要求寫一篇介紹一個城市的巨大變化。本題給出的材料較為詳細，動筆前應(yīng)先認真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語，句式等問題。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱問題較為復(fù)雜，時態(tài)涉及過去現(xiàn)在及將來的變化，注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。
點評：做英語書面表達時，要注意認真審題，分析體裁，確定時態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤。