Question

假如你是李華，你的美國朋友 Mike 寫信給你，想多了解“星光大道”這個電視節(jié)目的情況。請你根據(jù)以下提示，給他寫一封回信，并鼓勵他去參加這個節(jié)目。

1.  “星光大道”在中國是家喻戶曉的節(jié)目。

2. 大眾節(jié)目，想展示才藝的人都可以參加。

3. 表演形式：唱歌、跳舞、演奏樂器或其它才藝表演。

4. 一個叫“郝歌”的外國朋友在 2006 年還獲了三等獎。

5. 鼓勵他也去參加這個節(jié)目。

注意：1.字?jǐn)?shù)在 100 字左右。2.可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3. 開頭的句子已給出（不計入總字?jǐn)?shù)）。 

參考詞匯：才藝表演 Talent Show 

Dear Mike,

I’m very glad that you are interested in the CCTV program “Avenue of Stars”.

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Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

In my village a lot of children have left school for many different reason. Some families are so poor to send their children to school, so their kids have to earn money to support their families. There are also many parents do not think it useless to send their children to school. They prefer to have their children do something else rather than to let them go to school. I feel worried this. I think every children should have the opportunity to receive education. And it is necessary of us to care about the children, because one day they will play important part in the construction of our country. So ways must be found to prevent children from leave off their studies.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

考點：提綱類作文

點評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。