Question

3．假定你是天津大學的學生李津．第十三屆全運會（the 13th National Games） 將于今年9月在天津舉辦．現(xiàn)正在招募志愿者，你希望成為其中一員．請按要求用英文給組委會寫一封申請信，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：
（1）個人情況：年齡、性別；
（2）個人條件：英語好、愛好體育、善于交往、樂于助人、熟悉本地情況；
（3）承諾：提供最佳服務(wù)．
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；
（2）開頭語己為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；
（3）請適當加入細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫．
Dear Sir/Madam，
My name is Li Jin．I would like to work as a volunteer for the13th National Games．
I am a boy/girl of 17 and I am studying at high school now．I am good at English and I can talk with foreign tourists in English freely．（高分句型一）
I believe I can do a good job for the Games．First，I like sports and I know the place very well．Second，I get along with others easily，which is especially useful for a volunteer．（高分句型二）Third，I'm ready to give help whenever it is needed．My promise is to offer the best service possible to the people at the Games．（高分句型三）
Please consider my request，and I'm looking forward to your early reply．
Yours faithfully，
LiJin．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于圖表類作文，根據(jù)提示信息針對"是否父母應(yīng)該被允許看你的微信朋友圈"這一話題開展討論，大家發(fā)表了不同的看法，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：分別從不同觀點和理由兩個方面來討論該話題 2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：work as充當，擔任；am good at 擅長；get along with 與…相處；look forward to盼望
I am good at English and I can talk with foreign tourists in English freely．（高分句型一）
Second，I get along with others easily，which is especially useful for a volunteer．（高分句型二）
My promise is to offer the best service possible to the people at the Games．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
       My name is Li Jin．I would like to work as a volunteer for the 13th National Games．
       I am a boy/girl of 17 and I am studying at high school now．I am good at English and I can talk with foreign tourists in English freely．（高分句型一）
       I believe I can do a good job for the Games．First，I like sports and I know the place very well．Second，I get along with others easily，which is especially useful for a volunteer．（高分句型二）Third，I'm ready to give help whenever it is needed．My promise is to offer the best service possible to the people at the Games．（高分句型三）
       Please consider my request，and I'm looking forward to your early reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                              Yours faithfully，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Jin

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．