Question

假設(shè)你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席李明，為了增進(jìn)學(xué)生之間交流，學(xué)生會(huì)決定在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上建立中外學(xué)生英文交流論壇，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)提示介紹此論壇，并號(hào)召大家參與論壇。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右.
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫.
3. 開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù).

目的	提供交流平臺(tái)
內(nèi)容	要點(diǎn)	細(xì)節(jié)
	加強(qiáng)交流	結(jié)識(shí)朋友……
	提供幫助	學(xué)習(xí)，生活……
	獻(xiàn)計(jì)獻(xiàn)策	學(xué)校發(fā)展，校園生活……

Students’ Union has decided to set up our own BBS. ________________________
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Answer 1

Students’ Union has decided to set up our own BBS. All of us will benefit a lot from it. it offers us chances to communicate with each other. We can exchange our learning and life experiences on it. We can share different cultures as well.
What’s more , it is a good place for us. A life without a friend is a life without sunshine. Anyone who has difficulties with their study and daily life can ask for help on it.
If you have any good suggestions to offer, you can lend a helping hand. Good advice on how to enrich our school life and how to develop our school is also welcome. Wish you to join in and fully express your ideas. ?

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá)，文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來(lái)了，而且很具體，考生要把要點(diǎn)解釋清楚，不能有遺漏。除了表達(dá)這些要點(diǎn)以外，還要闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)，這就要求考生自己拓展發(fā)揮，在寫作的過(guò)程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時(shí)在列舉措施的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來(lái)很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時(shí)不要啰嗦，力求簡(jiǎn)潔。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】所給范文語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，運(yùn)用了一些詞組和好的句子：benefit a lot from “從…中獲益很多”， communicate with “和…交流”， as well“也”，lend a helping hand“助一臂之力”，.Anyone who has difficulties with their study and daily life can ask for help on it.這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句，還有范文還使用了 What’s more這樣的詞，使文章更加連貫。