Question

假設(shè)你是李華，明年要去英國(guó)留學(xué)，想通過一家英國(guó)留學(xué)生機(jī)構(gòu)尋找寄宿家庭。請(qǐng)你寫一封電子郵件，說(shuō)明你的要求：

1．房間的條件；

2．房子所處的位置和地段；

3．你喜歡的房東類型；

4．其它。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好。

Dear Sir/Madam,

                                                                                      

                                                                                       

                                                                                      

                                                                                      

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am a Chinese student who is going to study in London next month. I ‘m writing to ask you for finding a host family for me. Here are my requests.

First, I’d like a room of my own, which is clean and comfortable. Second, the apartment should not be far away from the center of the city. That is to say, it is convenient for me to get around. Third, the family can speak fluent English. In addition, I’d appreciate it if the host family can provide a washing machine and some cookers without additional charges so that I am able to wash my clothes and cook my own meals.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常簡(jiǎn)單，學(xué)生很容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的。考生在寫作之前必須認(rèn)真審題， 要求讓你寫一封信說(shuō)明對(duì)寄宿家庭的要求，對(duì)房子的位置和地段以及房間的要求和房東類型都需要以第三人稱來(lái)說(shuō)明。時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)即可。還有就是應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接和高級(jí)詞匯的應(yīng)用，以提高作文的檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，有條理，并使用了非常好的詞語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如 additional charges， It is convenient for… to do sth.; I’d appreciate it if …,以及which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：That is to say，In addition等等。值得學(xué)習(xí)借鑒。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。